Please, correct it.

Soon, I must pass an English exam. I would be grateful if u correct my mistakes,...
  
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Soon, I must pass an English exam. I would be grateful if u correct my mistakes, that are below.

Soap operas and people.

It is known that soap operas are watched by many people. Nowadays, both my sister and I watch an American serial "Extra". The soap opera shows us a story about Bridget and Annie who share a flat in the center of London. This serial is intresting and enjoyable,but above all it helps us to study the English language. I watch the serial because it helps me to study the English language very well. But for "Extra" my English speech becomes better a little bit.
In truth, watching soap operas has many pluses and minuses. A few friends of mine watch soap operas not only because they are enjoyable and realistic, but informative.In addition, soap operas help us to escape from problems of everyday life.
In contrast, if you are going to see any serial you spend a lot of your time on it. You can spend this time on really useful things, that are really important in your life.
In conclusion I want you take my advice : As you know, series takes a lot of free time, but some of them can learn you something important, I mean informative videos. If you really don't want waste your time on trifles, you won't watch some stupid and thoughtless series.
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что за слово serial?ya po4emu-to ne sliwala ego v upotreblenii. i 4to zna4it ""But for "Extra" my English speech becomes better a little bit""??? ya bi skazala-Watching this movie (sitcom) helps me to improve my english, to je samoe 4to napisano viwe-2 poslednih predlojeniya polu4aetsya povtoryautsya.
vmesto pluses i minuses nado advantages and disadvantages.
4to imelos v vidu pod slovom informative?ya bi dobavila ewe predlojenie, raskriv to, 4to vi imeete v vidu.
to watch a ne to see v 3em paragrafe i you will spend.
I want you to take my advice.
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"But for" = Если бы не, Благодаря. Lingvo12 в помощь.

my English speech becomes better a little bit""? -- Моя английская разговорная речь становится лучше по-немногу.

serial - ед. число, series - мн. число...Должно быть верным.

vmesto pluses i minuses nado advantages and disadvantages. -- да, так действительно лучше.

Informative - познавательный.

to watch a ne to see v 3em paragrafe i you will spend. -- will ?...

I want you to take my advice -- не заметил...поторопился видно.
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вы меня немного не поняли, я придиралась к словам с стилистической точки зрения, слово сериал не слышала. чтоб употребляли, по мне так лучше муви.
предложение с бат фор мне определнно не нравится, не выражаютмя они так, ну или на крайняк, thanks to Extra I also improve my speech and I feel free when I talk to someone.
я понимаю, что информэйтив значит познавательный, но как соуп опера может быть познавательной? Раскройте предложение, напр, I mean you can find many interesting in watching soap operas about...?????
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"But for" запомнилось сразу. Я это встречал 2 раза. 1ый раз - учитель. 2ой раз - носитель языка употребил.

But for your interference, things should have looked very black indeed. — Если бы не ваше вмешательство, дела, действительно, были бы плохи.

Сериалы помимо всякой ерунды могут включать в себя познавательную информацию, к примеру сериал тот же самый экстра, он для меня был познавателен, т.к. помог запомнить некоторые фразеологизмы и тд. и тп.
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Сенсационная беседа о мате! Ну почем же мат в русском языке, сми, песнях и даже в телевизоре? Ты узнаешь об этом первым: http://starland.ru/mat-norma-ili-otricatelnoe-yavlenie/
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Here you go Yevgeny:

It's well known that soap operas are watched by many people. Both my sister and I watch the American serial "Extra". The soap is a story about Bridget and Annie who share a flat in the centre of London. The serial is interesting and enjoyable, but above all, helps us to study English. I watch the serial because I feel it helps my English studies a lot, and I think my spoken English has improved because of it.
In general, watching soaps has positives and negatives. A few of my friends watch soaps because they're entertaining, realistic, informative and can also offer an escape from the problems of everyday life. But on the other hand, if you start watching a serial it can end up taking up a lot of your time, which might be better spent doing something more important.
In conclusion, my advice would be: Watch soaps if you think, they’re truly informative, entertaining and will improve your language skills, but don't waste your time on soaps that are poor quality, thoughtless and won't.
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It's so clear language... Not dialect. Now everybody telling with dialect.
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Здравствуйте!
У меня вопрос. Сегодня увидела фразу на брошке "only you in my heart". Мне кажется, что в этом предложении ошибка. Набрала в google - есть такая фраза. Может, это просторечье... Странно... Ведь сказуемого- нет!
Подскажите, пожалуйста!
Спасибо.
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так можно, эт просторечье "по-вашему"
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How I became a journalist.

I grew up very talkative child. So when I have been finishing school I with no doubt had joined the faculty of Journalism. I thought it was my real vocation.
At the first course one teacher had told us to bring some our publications from current newspapers for passing the examination.
So I went to a local agency «John Brown Corp», knowing that they have their own edition «News Cycle». I had asked sub-editor for helping me in this mission. He had smiled knowingly and asked me a few jobs on current affairs.
Firstly, I had to make a report from opening the exhibition of northern peoples’ national clothes.
And secondly, to write an article about changes of the level of literacy among the people due to the Internet. A little discouraged so tedious topics, I went home, producing an approximate plan for further action in my head.
Must say, I’ve coped with the task quickly enough. Because - what's hard to write 1000 signs about some kind of exhibition or about peoples’ spelling mistakes? But one thing didn’t give me a rest – that gray dullness, gazing from the pages of printed material. Without thinking twice I’d decided to dilute it by colorful illustrations of my own production. It has turned out brightly and funny enough.
Passing materials to the editor, I walked around waiting for a call with an estimate of my work. After an hour of silence I myself went back to know their opinion. Opening the door I had found the editor and the sub-editor hanging over the table. They had stood for a second, having seen me, and had amicably blown up a laughter. I’d asked what had going on. Wiping tears the editor told me:
- Your pictures are wonderful! These deer in mittens and other. Your article has a great make-up. But I am afraid that the main task of mass-media is covering news rather than thinking on paper about how the deer are probably jealous at the sight of clothes of their masters!
- Know, - the sub-editor has continued, - you could be a perfect children’s author! Or, if you want to stay closer to journalism, I can offer you a broadcasting: to read fairytales aloud with your own comments.
They had burst out laughing again.
And I was wounded, trudged home – to think about my abilities. I had turned on a TV-set: there was a flash news: in Siberia, reindeer pulled down a hat from a shepherd and drove off into the steppe. «And now it can be argued which of us is a loser», - I had said sarcastically and smiled.
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